Being Young | Essay

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Being Young | Essay

Engelsk essay om teenageproblemer.

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Fik 12 for den, og fik blot kommentaren : Spot on. Den kommer omkring forskellige emner såsom: graviditet, kærlighed, spiseforstyrelser og selvværdsproblemer.

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Der er nogle sproglige fejl og sproget minder meget om talesprog.

Uddrag

Teenager's today has a lot of problems. For example they have a lot of love problems. Many teens think they have found “Mr. right”, which I think is bullshit, because not many actually have. Then when the couples break up, many of the girls get really sad, because a lot of them thought they had found the one. Then some of them starve, because they think the relationship is over, because there is something wrong with them, which is stupid because all girls are good as they are! Starving can lead to anorexia, and you can die of that. Anorexia is a very dangerous decease, which many teenage girls get. They just stop eating, because they see themselves as fat. Many of them aren't really fat, they just get that picture of themselves, and then they can't get rid of that picture. Another problem a lot of girls struggle with is low self esteem. Then they can isolate themselves from other... Køb adgang for at læse mere

Being Young | Essay

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  • 20-04-2012
    Så faktisk bedre ud end forventet. Men nu må vi se om den er noget værd :P