My Fantasy Story

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My Fantasy Story

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It was about 9 o'clock. My favorite episode of ”One” was about to start. But the commercials had to be done first. I could just finish my homework. I sat on my usual place in the sofa, and laid the legs up. I was tired after a long day in school. I had a headache, because I felt when I was playing soccer with my friends. Then the show started. I'd watched it every night in about a year now. But I had seen this episode before. It was raw action, nothing with kissing girls! Yuck… On that time in my life being friends with a girl, or KISSING one, was totally forbidden. Actually the main character had my name. Andy. But this man was in the 20's and I was only 10. I think he looked a bit like my father, which was an actor. But that couldn't bee him. He died in a plain crash 2 years ago, when he was on his way home, from a movie he was making. Now it was only me, my sister and mom.
It was halfway through the episode, when the TV began scratching. I tried to turn channel, and then back again. It didn't work. I could only hear single words. I stood up and pushed harder on cables behind the TV. Suddenly it gave a chock. I couldn't release the cable. I just kept chocking, and it... Køb adgang for at læse mere

My Fantasy Story

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  • 02-01-2013
    Bedømt af Folkeskoleelev i 8. klasse
    Fandt en grammatik fejl i denne opgave... Der stod 'leafs' og det hedder 'leaves', når det er i flertal
  • 17-05-2010
    det er en meget god historie men der er nogle enkelte stave fejl. men ellers god
  • 30-11-2016
    Meget fin eventyr, det var lige noget jeg kunne bruge
  • 09-05-2014
    kunne ikk bruge den til noget