Fame and Success

Opgaven er kvalitetssikret af redaktionen på Skolehjælpen.dk.
  • Folkeskole 9. klasse
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Fame and Success

Opgaven lød på at man skulle beskrive hvad fame(berømmelse) og success(succes) var og hvordan de er i forhold til hinanden. Man kunne også vælge at skrive en af sine egne succeser, ligesom jeg har gjort under "My Succesfull Story". Opgaven skulle bare være på mellem 350 og 450 ord.

Lærers kommentar

-Good reflections!
-Very few mistakes.
-You write fluently.

Elevens kommentar

- De enkelte fejl der var i min opgave har jeg rettet, så den opgave i får at se er fejlfri. Og de få fejl jeg havde har jeg rettet i samarbejde med min engelsk lærer.

Uddrag

"Fame and success:
Fame and success can be perceived in many different ways. I think that fame is when you are rich and almost everyone knows your name, because you are a pop star, rock star, actor or much more. What success is depends on in which way you want to have success and what you want to be successful with.

Somebody thinks that to be a famous star all over the world is success, but I think that it can be a bad thing to have fame in that size. When you a star, mostly in Hollywood, you don't have a private life and you might get hunted by the paparazzi all the time.

Maybe you can't even go to the supermarket without they are following you, and you have to look good all the time, because if you don't wear make-up or if you have ugly clothes on they put you on the front side in the media and you will take all the headlines in the magazines."... Køb adgang for at læse mere

Fame and Success

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  • 24-06-2013
    Bedømt af Folkeskoleelev i 9. klasse
    god stil, godt skrevet :)