Fristil i Engelsk - Short Story: "The Bet"

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Novelle: Fristil i Engelsk - Short Story: "The Bet"

Min klasse fik for opgave at skrive en fristil i Engelsk, så jeg skrev en kort novelle (en side).
Novellen handler om en gruppe drenge, og en dreng og en pige. Drengegruppen overhører drengen (Daniel) og pigen (Lily)s samtale, og beslutter sig for at lave et væddemål, om hvorvidt en af drengene fra drengegruppen (Aaron) kan score Lily, og dumpe hende igen.

Lærers kommentar

Min Engelsklærer reagerede meget positivt på den, og gav mig tolv. Den eneste fejl som min lærer (og Microsoft word) havde bemærket, har jeg allerede rettet, så der skulle ikke være nogle fejl i.
Held og lykke :)

Uddrag

"The Bet:
After school Lily and Daniel started cleaning the toilets. They started with the boy’s washroom, which was the most disgusting thing Lily had ever seen.

How in heaven’s name was it possible to pee on the floor?!
“Okay, now I kind of hate the guy with the annoying smirk…” Lily said, while cleaning the mirrors. Someone had written the word “fuck” with graffiti on it. How uncreative.

“I know, right? He should be here cleaning, instead of hanging out with that cross-dressing guy…” Daniel said. Lily laughed.

“But damn it was funny when that Calvin-guy was standing on the roof in a pink dress and a blonde wig…” she smirked.

“Maybe he lost a bet or something… those weird guys don’t have anything to do but making weird bets, according to rumors at least…” he said, and wiped sweat of his forehead. It wasn’t hot in the room or anything, he was just nervous about being alone with Lily."... Køb adgang for at læse mere

Fristil i Engelsk - Short Story: "The Bet"

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